User talk:Arijunior AB
Hmb436 peer commentary
[edit]Overall I think the backbone of this page is here, but there needs to be more depth in the article. When you describe the pathology of this fungus you should maybe talk about the actual case of cutaneous infections. Did they treat it successfully? What was able to stop it? Also, specifically for the example of it infecting grapevines, were there any repercussions to the infection. Did it kill the plant or just reduce its fitness? I really liked how you subdivided the growth and morphology into the colony appearance by naked eye and appearance under a microscope. I also think you should include a bit of the background on this fungus. Where was it first discovered and by who? Is it ecologically important at all? Looking forward to reading the full article. LewisKurschner (talk) 19:49, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
Hey Arijunior AB, you’ve got a lot of good construction with your fungi page so far as there are many references, markups, and links to other pages. Good job on the details pertaining to the morphology of your fungi. Adding images would help emphasize the description. Furthermore, perhaps you can expand on its physiological mechanisms, such as how does C.cladosporidoies travel long distances? What type of antifungal metabolites? Are there any industrial disadvantages your fungi causes? What advantages does that provide for its population? This would help the reader make connections between the fungi’s appearance and interaction with its environment. Good luck on writing! Dorochoi (talk) 03:00, 31 October 2015 (UTC)
Nice work!
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